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:iconsentinelsmelody:
So... I need your help with this one. It's supposed to enter a contest on another website and so I'd like you to tell me what could be improved^^. Please...?? ;)
It's a romantic Bella and Edward – drawing based on this pretty photo by sakura-darkpanther:
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I titled it „the Fairytale“ because it refers to the part of New Moon where Edward has returned and Bella says something like "prince returned, the fairytale was back on...“. She didn't say it exactly like this, but I think you know what I mean ;).
And now your critique, please ^-^!

Graphite and colored pencils, A4
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~TotalTomboy5 Mar 10, 2012  Student General Artist
this is so cute

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:icontesstennant:
That is soo beautiful. i swear i can see the actual emotions.... :O <3

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:iconnight-willow:
it looks so natural (i mean the proportions lol)
Very nice

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:iconsentinelsmelody:
~SentinelsMelody Dec 29, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
thank you!:)

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Hey Kyle,
I like how the whole paper is not covered by the composition. The shadowy contrast is nice and subtle. Maybe considr trying a light color wash for the background. I know how well you use watercolor.Everything else in that composition looks awesome:)!!!!!
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ToT it's so BEAUTIFUL!!! great job

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~SentinelsMelody Feb 16, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you ^^!

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this is beautiful!!!

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~SentinelsMelody Jan 28, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :)

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`synconi Jan 10, 2008   Artisan Crafter
Your beautiful art has been featured in my journal: [link]

Thank you very much for sharing! :heart: xx

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